I need some help with this book

I sent out an email to my subscribers asking for a hand. Since this is my first attempt at writing a book I need to be sure I'm making sense of it. For a long time I've been working on this weird theory about how the gut brain can soothe the worries that the head brain often creates for itself. But over time my perspective has become so involved I may not see things from the perspective of someone looking at it for the first time. This is known as "the curse of knowledge". It means that sometimes knowing a [...]